ching. ching. gone.
a quarter of an hourly wage dissappears into the doorman's virgin cup.
even a strong man can't live off of pb and jam forever.
fisticuff swaggering , and old vinyl testimonials
pretty girls idolizing betty page.
Who will cut your hair, if everyone present is dead?
amputated audience thumping jazz-like.
only got a right leg to spare.
upper bodies remain solitary
out of sync like so many modern encounters, and lovers.
resolute waist resisting the music.
war not on anyone's mind.
one armed primitive fist pumping--
as marilyn monroe confesses her sins from the loud speakers.
poor JKF is dead—won't see that great pussy no more.
drumsticks rain down like hail on saints.
god bless.
I am the anti-christ.
pissed tributaries run off porcelain mountains.
don't these future bad cops know how to aim?
Christ.
what would mother think?
fuck it--beer mouth wash is a preview to 21rst century oral hygiene
this band sucks balls.
margie smells sweet--perhaps it's something she brought from Russia.
bolshevik nations shifting from revolutions to pomades?
America has won.
sing rough sex like, my man,.
huffs-UFF! UFF!
those zombie mother fuckers still remain @ rest.
go home and check off your existential tallies.
statuettes gyrating, afraid to touch—afraid for an emotional connection.
again dead voices crackle up from behind.
lament. lament with me.
gloomy neon orange ear pieces dances with me.
sweet come on, but
when did man invent such bull shit.
dear, sir, don't whine:
“Why can't we all get along?
cree indians have the answer.
Alamir
2008-10-29 20:52:02
Out of curiosity, why did you choose to have only certain words grammatically capitalized? Sorrel does the same thing with her writing and claims she does it on purpose.. I'm just wondering what's the overall effect you're trying to achieve by starting a sentence with a lower case letter?
bobby_dang
2008-10-29 20:58:30
'The post your entry' is too high up, and blends in with your logo. I assumed it was background. You might consider placing it somewhere more conspicuous.
Also, have you tried making a new account lately? It takes 3 minutes before your ajax login screen appears.
Alamir
2008-10-29 21:04:27
..and I'll test out the login.
bobby_dang
2008-10-29 21:06:19
Alamir
2008-10-29 21:16:17
My bro did. We didn't clone, we perfected the facebook design....and then added to it.
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