You are aesthetically pleasing,
the reason for which I first noticed in you.
And later I found your personality equally pleasing.
I also noted your chest to waist ratio is suitable for birthing.
Therefore, I think you should live in my house.
the reason for which I first noticed in you.
And later I found your personality equally pleasing.
I also noted your chest to waist ratio is suitable for birthing.
Therefore, I think you should live in my house.
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Alamir
2008-10-29 20:27:56
Keshiaaa
2008-11-13 03:12:22
It's simple, and I smiled while reading it.
alishahnovin
2008-11-13 13:16:03
Glad you like it... I guess a utilitarian poem is allowed to make someone smile, as part of the utility of a poem is to evoke emotion.
Keshiaaa
2008-11-14 00:21:44
alishahnovin
2008-11-14 00:55:13
A smile to indicate approval, whilst not relying on emotion...a utilitarian smile. I dig.
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