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UTILITARIAN LOVE POEM

alishahnovin

2008-10-29 14:07:42

Creative Writing

You are aesthetically pleasing,
the reason for which I first noticed in you.
And later I found your personality equally pleasing.
I also noted your chest to waist ratio is suitable for birthing.
Therefore, I think you should live in my house.
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alishahnovin
This poem is a . The poem may need to be expanded. This poem has been nominated for . I love you, (!) For your unparalled beauty () your warm...

Alamir

Alamir

2008-10-29 20:27:56

This is why it took Mill 21 years until he finally married his wife Taylor... she didn't want to be treated as a tool.

Keshiaaa

Keshiaaa

2008-11-13 03:12:22

I like this.
It's simple, and I smiled while reading it.
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alishahnovin

alishahnovin

2008-11-13 13:16:03

Replying to Keshiaaa:
Glad you like it... I guess a utilitarian poem is allowed to make someone smile, as part of the utility of a poem is to evoke emotion.

Keshiaaa

Keshiaaa

2008-11-14 00:21:44

I swear. No emotion was present in the smile.
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alishahnovin

alishahnovin

2008-11-14 00:55:13

Replying to Keshiaaa:
A smile to indicate approval, whilst not relying on emotion...a utilitarian smile. I dig.

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