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AWFUL THOUGHTS

Georgie

2008-12-03 01:07:47

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disturbing thoughts pop into her head. for some reason, the idea of being shot in the back of the head appeals to her at this moment . she pictures the impact, the brains flying through the air in slow motion, the slumping of her neck. the person beside her would be unaware of what had happened for about 12 seconds, and then reality would set in. she looks at the man next to her, and feels bad for thinking these thoughts, for making him an imaginary witness to her terrible fantasy. she raises her arm behind her head and feels the scar from the bullet hole, smiling to herself.
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Lilian

Lilian

2008-12-04 03:10:18

That was pretty creepy.

genius_advice

genius_advice

2008-12-04 14:31:40

Agreed. I think it was because 'bullet' hole was specified at the last line. *shudders*

Georgie

Georgie

2008-12-04 14:34:51

sometimes it's awfully fun to be creepy



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